As promised, yet another six-sentence excerpt from what was my NaNo novel and - now that NaNoWriMo is very much over - has become a full-on Work in Progress :)
William was up before dawn – though his sleep had been restless and he was still exhausted, he found that he didn’t want to close his eyes again. Not once he’d woken from his nightmare about the day Lillian had left him.He roused Sam and Mac as early as he dared, and sure enough they rode into the outskirts of Eagle Pass by nine in the morning. “Daisy’s got a prime spot with her house…right on the main drag. She’s smart enough to not have a bar there, though.”“No bar?” Mac whined.